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Edit passage: jobs lost to robots

Short answer

Certain jobs, mostly simple or hazardous ones, are irretrievably lost to robotics. Thus spot welders, press operators, spray painters, cleaners, machine loaders, and grinding and polishing machine operators are endangered species.

Edit the following passage which contains a good many errors. Certain jobs mostly simple or hazardos one are irretrievably loses too robotics. Thus spot welders press operators, spray painters cleaners, machine loaders grinding and polishing machine operators is endangered species.

Edited passage

Certain jobs, mostly simple or hazardous ones, are irretrievably lost to robotics. Thus spot welders, press operators, spray painters, cleaners, machine loaders, and grinding and polishing machine operators are endangered species.

Corrections made

  • Commas placed around "mostly simple or hazardous ones".
  • "hazardos" corrected to "hazardous"; "one" changed to "ones" to agree with "jobs".
  • "loses" changed to "lost" (past participle, passive voice); "too" changed to "to".
  • Commas added in the list of occupations: "Thus spot welders, press operators, ...".
  • "is" changed to "are" (the subject is plural).

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