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The text is corrected: 'I'm well aware of the hardships faced by these Kashmiri vendors,' he said, as I looked at him, still confused. 'They eat in the morning... look incidental.'

Edit the following text do as to make it free from errors: It was then that my brother-in-law spoke to me. I m well aware of the hardships faced by these kashmiri vendors he said as i looked at him still confused. they eat in morning then spend the rest of the day roaming around the city on foot hungry and thirsty. When i saw them i wanted to offer them food. But they have their pride. They would never accept anything unless i pretended to be interested in their wares and made the offer of the food look incidental.

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It was then that my brother-in-law spoke to me. "I'm well aware of the hardships faced by these Kashmiri vendors," he said, as I looked at him, still confused. "They eat in the morning, then spend the rest of the day roaming around the city on foot, hungry and thirsty. When I saw them, I wanted to offer them food. But they have their pride. They would never accept anything unless I pretended to be interested in their wares and made the offer of the food look incidental."

Corrections made

  • "I m" corrected to "I'm"; quotation marks and commas added around the spoken words.
  • "kashmiri" capitalised as a proper adjective; "i" corrected to "I" throughout.
  • "they eat" started with a capital letter; "in morning" changed to "in the morning".
  • Commas added before "still confused", after "foot" and after "When I saw them".

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