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Incessant practice went on, and the day came when we had to leave for America to study at an advanced institute. My father was always there to guide me... I now know better than ever that ceaseless effort is the key to success.

Edit the text given below: Incessant practices went up. and the day came when we had to leave to America to study at an advance institute. Always my father was there to guide me. Today, I'm quite a successful pianist, but my father does not stop saying practice more. God smiles and the perfection just glitters when practice touches the top. I now know much than ever that ceaseless effort is the key of success.

Edited text

Incessant practice went on, and the day came when we had to leave for America to study at an advanced institute. My father was always there to guide me. Today, I'm quite a successful pianist, but my father does not stop saying, "Practise more." God smiles, and perfection just glitters when practice touches the top. I now know better than ever that ceaseless effort is the key to success.

Corrections made

  • "practices" changed to the uncountable noun "practice"; "went up" changed to "went on".
  • "leave to America" changed to "leave for America".
  • "advance" changed to "advanced" (adjective).
  • Word order "Always my father was there" changed to "My father was always there".
  • Quotation marks and a comma added around "Practise more".
  • Comma added before "and perfection"; "the perfection" changed to "perfection".
  • "much than ever" changed to "better than ever"; "key of success" changed to "key to success".

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