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Edit text: Bengali lady and sitar player

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But the Bengali lady in green, who kept darting looks at the drummer rather than at the beautiful sitar player, whispered suddenly, "He keeps staring at me, Minakshi. Or perhaps it is I who keep staring at him. I can't take my eyes off him, Minakshi."

Edit the following text: But the Bengali lady with green who kept darting looks at the drummer rather than on the beautiful sitar player whispered suddenly he keeps staring at me Minakshi. Or, perhaps it is I who keep staring at him. I cant take my eyes off him Minakshi.

Edited text

But the Bengali lady in green, who kept darting looks at the drummer rather than at the beautiful sitar player, whispered suddenly, "He keeps staring at me, Minakshi. Or perhaps it is I who keep staring at him. I can't take my eyes off him, Minakshi."

Corrections made

  • "with green" changed to "in green" (clothing takes "in").
  • Commas added around the relative clause "who kept darting looks ... sitar player".
  • "on the beautiful sitar player" changed to "at the beautiful sitar player" ("look at").
  • Quotation marks added around the spoken words, with a comma after "suddenly" and a capital "He".
  • Commas added before "Minakshi" (direct address), and the unnecessary comma after "Or" removed.
  • "cant" corrected to "can't".

✓ Answer checked by Claude Opus 5.5 (high effort)

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