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Edit text: pronoun for God

Short answer

I have no idea whether the right pronoun for God is He, She or It. But this I'm sure of: if God could somehow be induced to take that test, God would not come out macho, and not feminist either, but right in the middle. Fellow androgynes, it's a nice thought.

Edit the following text. I have no idea whether the right pronoun for God is He, She or It. But this I'm sure of. If god could somehow be induced to take that test, God will not come out macho and not feminism, either, but right at the middle. Fellow androgynes, its a nice thought.

Edited text

I have no idea whether the right pronoun for God is He, She or It. But this I'm sure of: if God could somehow be induced to take that test, God would not come out macho, and not feminist either, but right in the middle. Fellow androgynes, it's a nice thought.

Corrections made

  • A colon (or dash) is used after "sure of" to introduce the explanation.
  • "If god" changed to "if God" (capital letter for God), with a lower-case "if" after the colon.
  • "will not" changed to "would not" to match the unreal condition "could ... be induced".
  • "feminism" corrected to the adjective "feminist", and a comma added before "and not feminist either" for balance.
  • "at the middle" changed to "in the middle".
  • "its" corrected to "it's" (it is).

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